5/24/2023 0 Comments The Rocchetti Queen by Bree PorterYou hate it but you know it." I tapped a finger to my temple. Is there literally anything this chameoleon can't do? What a superwoman. Then there is Elena Falcone, our genius, almighty heroine who was a doctor & a scientist in Kingpin's Foxglove and Tarzan and spy master in Empress of Poisons. What are these crusty men doing all day? Playing video games and braiding each others hair? The book starts with the three year time jump and from one chapter to the next Elena (h) and her son are hiding in the wild, climbing trees and hiding behind rocks and I'm like what the fuck is happening? While there is Konstantin (H) and his fam, who is afraid of him, because Konstantin turned manic when Elena left him and he's yanking out people's tongues left and right or doing worse and again what the fuck is happening?īut the question I asked myself the most was 'How did these dumb af mafia bosses' survive this long? There are five mafia bosses trying to find one woman for three years and couldn't do shit until Elena comes back and decides to infiltrate Tatiana's operation. I didn't even recognize these characters anymore. Sloppy plotting, sloppy formatting, sloppy editing and sloppy characters. When I think about this book I just think of one word: SLOPPY. How come I can read a 850p fantasy book in a day, but struggle so much with this measly 250p mafia book for four days? □
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